{i'm working on a new project.
it's a book written in free form poetry
like out of the dust by karen hesse.
only it's about a summer romance.
no names, no descriptions, no quotes
like a distant memory in a way.
here's the prologue of sorts}
I'm here again
At the same spot.
Our last meeting place.
Where we said goodbye.
The dawn is breaking
Into a sunrise.
We never saw one of those-
None that I recall.
It's warm here.
Even now,
In this time of year.
I can smell the air,
Full of brine, so salty,
Yet lovely and kind,
Enveloping me
In the warmest memories.
I can almost feel
Your breath,
Along my cheek,
Cool and hot.
My knees are shaking,
And my heart is racing.
I stand still-
So very still-
Hoping this illusion lasts.
I close my eyes.
I can almost here you-
Laughing at me
And comforting me.
Loving me.
But time does not stop.
And when I open my eyes,
The illusion is gone
As the sunrise ends.
{source}
it's a book written in free form poetry
like out of the dust by karen hesse.
only it's about a summer romance.
no names, no descriptions, no quotes
like a distant memory in a way.
here's the prologue of sorts}
I'm here again
At the same spot.
Our last meeting place.
Where we said goodbye.
The dawn is breaking
Into a sunrise.
We never saw one of those-
None that I recall.
It's warm here.
Even now,
In this time of year.
I can smell the air,
Full of brine, so salty,
Yet lovely and kind,
Enveloping me
In the warmest memories.
I can almost feel
Your breath,
Along my cheek,
Cool and hot.
My knees are shaking,
And my heart is racing.
I stand still-
So very still-
Hoping this illusion lasts.
I close my eyes.
I can almost here you-
Laughing at me
And comforting me.
Loving me.
But time does not stop.
And when I open my eyes,
The illusion is gone
As the sunrise ends.
{source}
6 comments:
so pretty! i love the first 3 stanzas the most. and the picture is gorgeous!
What a fantastic idea! I could feel all of this.
"I can smell the air,
Full of brine, so salty,
Yet lovely and kind,
Enveloping me
In the warmest memories."
i love that part! its so descriptive and really gets your imagination going! :)
That was beautiful. Wow. It was written so well.
Beautiful.
Wow what a beautiful post! It was great to read that!
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